I'm still working on page 3 and I know that there's going to be a lot of progression as the book goes on in terms of style, but I'm still trying to figure out line widths, for one thing. I was trying to be more variable with the line widths to achieve depth, but I'm not very good at it. It should be like muscles, where contrasting sides are different, and mine always end up weighted weird.
So I ended up redoing one of the panels, with cleaner, more uniform lines. I think I like the result better. For now, anyway.